Delicious soft born candy
delicately placed
with emotional
tear droplets
A contest entry
- Quickie, 10 words, 10 mins. 10 entries. Reserve a spot. PAYING IT FORWARD. by Naridill.
300 points, ended June 27, 2007, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh, what a sweet phrase, "tear droplets!"
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Nicely penned. Very good imagery.
Thankies for entering.
Much luck
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Nicely Done
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Prompts up
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