The tides roll in
As the clouds become dark
The winds pick up gently
As the rain makes its mark
The sun will not shine
Not at all tonight
The thunder is loud
And full of fright
The rain falls harder
Against my warm skin
As the breeze flows
My sin now begins
I watch the lightning
As it strikes the sky
I arch my back
As the rain applies
Running it's course
Making me melt
My hands raise above
And I take what I'm dealt
A contest entry
- Goddess of Rain Contest by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended July 19, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Embark the storm goddess for she wants to reign the rain! Very lovely rendition. I want to thank you for entering my "Goddess of Rain" contest.

Ted E

