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Storm Goddess

The tides roll in
As the clouds become dark
The winds pick up gently
As the rain makes its mark

The sun will not shine
Not at all tonight
The thunder is loud
And full of fright

The rain falls harder
Against my warm skin
As the breeze flows
My sin now begins

I watch the lightning
As it strikes the sky
I arch my back
As the rain applies

Running it's course
Making me melt
My hands raise above
And I take what I'm dealt

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    July 18, 2007

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    Embark the storm goddess for she wants to reign the rain! Very lovely rendition. I want to thank you for entering my "Goddess of Rain" contest.

    Ted E