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a dragonfly (haiku)







a dragonfly
mirrored in the quiet duck-pond
the sun









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mirror, mirror, on the wall ...
who is the most beautiful of all ?
the dragonfly ... or the sun ?

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  • freespirit51 gold member
    November 25, 2007

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    really beautiful piece of poetry. I love this haiku my friend..Interesting this mirror effect on the water..Congrats on the bronze.

  • Candy6
    July 31, 2007
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    Really good haiku. If you pull the dragonfly's wings it looks like tiny as the as shaking pepper.

  • tawk gold member
    June 27, 2007

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    What a beautiful Haiku, It is so lovely I could picture it for myself with your wonderful words. Congrats on the Bronze


  • glued-to
    June 27, 2007

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    this is pretty i like it it reminids me of a peaceful summer's day. and duck ponds of course are awesome. good write

  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    June 27, 2007
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    How absolutely divine. Loved this!.. x

  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    June 27, 2007
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    Your prompt is ~ Dragonfly
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