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Where I Belong

Is anybody listening?
Can anybody hear my screams?
My world is crashing down
On my shoulders,
And there’s no one to blame but me.

Somebody deliver me
From my systematic state of mind.
My lucid scars are proof
Of my weakness
And they’re mine to bear alone.

I’m ridden with disease,
Bitten by the suicidal plague,
As you utter my demise
Under your breath,
I wait for death’s embrace.

You watch me bleed and writhe
In a pool of crimson sorrow.
I call to the keeper
Of the valley of death,
The one true place I belong.

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  • wkd wen
    June 27, 2007
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    very good

    i can relate to this one so i think its very good well done keep it up