excited wasps (haiku)

10-words-version :

excited wasps
fervently competing on slippery hills
chocolate covered strawberries

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haiku-version :

wasps competing
on slippery hills - chocolate covered
strawberries

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HAIKU / SENRYU • next in list

A contest entry

My 2nd Quickie Contest 10/10/10 by countrybabe. 525 points, ended June 27, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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MargaretG
June 27, 2007

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Yum yum!
too bad the wasps got there first!
Great image, congratulations on your win!

maa
June 27, 2007
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don't worry, they don't eat a lot ...

Lavender Butterfly
June 27, 2007
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This is fabulous... x

poeticweaver
June 27, 2007

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-Excellent-
A very created piece, no doubt...
All the best to ya in the contest!

Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~

countrybabe
June 27, 2007
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Nicely Done
Thank you for entering

countrybabe
June 27, 2007
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PROMPT: 'Chocolate Covered Strawberries'

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