Follow me down
Down down down
I was doing so good
On top of the world
I was doing great
Untill now
Follow me down
Down down down
My mind was ok,
Finally all better
But now its begging me
To just get out
Follow me down
Down down down
I can only feel hurt
Betrayed, and lonely
Even though i betrayed myself
And i removed myself from everyone
Follow me down
Down down down
No one can save me
Can? I meant should
Leave me to wallow
And just be down
Author notes
Im just venting sorry
Just venting sorry
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I really like this. No need to be sorry for venting...sometimes all you need is a piece of paper and a pen to make you feel a little better.
If it's any comfort at all, I feel the same way. I know our situations are probably a little different...but I feel like nothings going right anymore. Sometimes it makes me feel better, knowing that I'm not the only one in the world that feels this way.
Anyways, great job as usual! your poetry is awesome, keep writing!
[Jessica]
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Yeah,
Well situation does not have to be the same to understand and feel the same feelings. And yeah pen and paper help tons. As well as knowing that i am not alone...most definately
Thank you for your praise, i enjoy hearing it
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