Summer Rain
shattered dream
melancholy injuries
turn to faded memories...
Author notes
prompt: summer rain
A contest entry
- 10/10/10 by Lady Eventide.
300 points, ended June 27, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow this one is one of the very best that you've wrote so far!!!
melancholy injuries
turn to faded memories
that part is just too good!!!
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Oooo. Nice word choice. Cookies for you! ^_^
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see see
wow... awwing golden statue there~
nice working
awesome vocabulary!
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Well done. Congratulations on the gold, truly deserved.
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Wow. Well done with this piece. The last part really made me go...wow. The words "faded memories" in itself were powerful. The poem was just...so great!
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Sometimes summer rain makes us just sit and think upon all the past memories...Really when we are bored during the rain.Good Write
Blessings
~Cheryl~ -
Prompt: Summer rain. Have fun.
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