The day I had the sky in my palms
I Felt in my arms the entire world
And all my silence started speaking
Baby I had you with me
And in the summer you brought spring.
All the tunes
All the rhymes
Laying inside me
Got the meaning
And lady luck was in my possession during those days.
A contest entry
- One Day: Real Love by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended June 27, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very nice indeed and very sweet too, Shapla.Commendable job.
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Thanks for commenting dada.
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hmmmmm, lady luck? interesting. Your title is very nice
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Thanks honey.I'm glad you liked it.
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great piece. I love the line--'sky in my palms'.. Truly enjoed it...
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Thanks a lot for reading.
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Beautiful stuff. Not exactly what I was looking for... this more the flowery kind of love than the gritty kind of love (and I have this thing about using the word "baby" in poetry lol) But really, you have some fantastic lines in this piece.
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