Hearing those silent whispers I try to find the way
My harbor turns away face
So buried under my dripping destruction I lay
Numb, in a state of motionlessness.
Searching for a luster in the darkness of disaster.
Broken wings break my spirits everytime I try to fly
Still I have to try to reach the sky.
Life's story doesn't have any end
So I need to mend
And keep my window open for a new sunshine.
Author notes
Used the quotes option and the following quote
"~That one last shot's a Permanent Vacation And how high can you fly with broken wings? Life's a journey not a destination And I just can't tell just what tomorrow brings ~"
A contest entry
- Options..Options..Options by fallenangel671.
1200 points, ended July 13, 2007, 52 entries
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Beautifully penned from an angelic heart
God will lead you on your way,to the sky.Angels will support your broken wings. So spread out your wings and let them guide you to your home when your journey comes to an end..Thank you for sharing this beautiful write with me.You have lightened my heart this morning.Thank you very much for your comment on my work....I greatly appreciate it. Especially from you , you are a very talented poet... -
wow i loved this, didnt expect this from this quote, its awesome, loved this,
good luck in the contest
keep writing
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Thanks for your comment.
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Hopeful poem at last! good
I like the following lines very much
Broken wings break my spirits everytime I try to fly
Still I have to try to reach the sky.
Good luck to you in the contest
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Thank you.
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Awwww. very beautifully penned...Lovely indeed...
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Thanks for reading my piece with such concern.
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