Dark,you are with your eyes so grim
Darkside, intrigues I go on a whim
illumination so bright I tingle from thought
sophistication of darkness no fear, yet distraught
provoked by your nature, I am drawn by the force
kinetic magnetism, pure lustful source
intrigued by the energy,desire so strong
mystified by this stranger,how could it be wrong
perplexed individual, so demandingly fierce
explodes deep within me, this sharp witted pierce
sparking more passion with each aching thrust
flames burning higher, enforcing this lust
fireworks bursting, such a beautiful sight
destruction surrounding this passion filled night
desire more pleasure,more needed than air
emotions uncertain,eyes open, no ones there
A contest entry
- wordbank from DARK by theDARK1.
300 points, ended June 30, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I never knew you felt this way, LOL
an excellent write filled with wonderful images 
As I see it took the Gold! Congrats, well deserved, have a beautiful day, Ken IBT 
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You have always rocked at these wordbank writes. Hand me a bunch of words and I go all duh....lol. I have those dern magnet words on my fridge, and stand for hours just staring, thinking WTF mate???? LOL. I applaud your ingenious here.
Blessings be,
Billie Jean
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be still me beating heart that echoes throughout the DARKness. stranger by night, later lover by day on the DARKside of the moon. welcome to my home, DARK.
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This is great! i really loved the ending how you said; "Desire more pleasure,more needed than air emotions uncertain eyes open no ones there" . Keep up the good work.
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