Beneath the diamond lights of heaven,
The stars up in the skies
I see the warmth within your eyes
Like candles flicking of love's essence,
Two hearts that beat in tune
Under the blaze of a sultry moon
I see the warmth within your eyes
They cast shadows of doubt away
Embracing where these two hearts lay
Under the blaze of a sultry moon
Our souls eclipse and collide
Feelings that cannot be denied
Embracing where there two hearts lay,
Like candles flicking of love's essence
Beneath the diamond lights of heaven
I've been gifted with your presence
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A contest entry
- Here's a Start by WarrioroftheHeart.
525 points, ended July 10, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congratulations on your silver, a wonderful poem
Truly all you have written is a gift and what a beautiful gift it is,
Thanks for sharing
Love and Light'
Frozentearz -
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Thank you for the much appreciated comment.
Storm
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Thanks for your entry, a great demonstration of a ripple and a beautiful romantic take on the first line given.
Good luck in the contest.
Adrian
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Thank you for the comment Adrian and for honoring me with a silver trophy.
Storm
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