These tears are not from pain
though ecstasy from our love
near drives me insane
take me how you will
I love you deep inside
bring me back to this moment
again and again
emotions rise and plummet
release cums and I cry.
A contest entry
- Give Me What You Got Picture Inspired by theredcatjazzoflove.
400 points, ended June 27, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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very deep and quick piece dearee if i want to add you to the finalist but great write. it was some powerful wording in this piece.


