I know, baby. I feel it too.
When each and every day begins
fresh and new with ache
and still as the day is through,
I’m so sorry my love,
but it’s there when I look at you.
They say the pain is worth the cost,
all the tears we’ve cried;
yet my heart, oh my heart,
my heart is so encased in frost
as every time I see a child
I wonder what we’ve lost.
I understand, baby, how your hurt remains.
They spilt your blood with clinical ease,
but look at me, look my way, look within my eyes,
I watched and felt your pain
and now I feel I’m losing you
that we’ll never be again.
A contest entry
- Give Me What You Got Picture Inspired by theredcatjazzoflove.
400 points, ended June 27, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Sad
A very passionately sad poem that rings with emotion and despair.
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Dam, you put cut throat emotions right out there for everyone to shed a tear on...this is brilliant...a good fresh perspective on the pic, ya see so much lovey-dovey passion stuff, this is nice change even if it is heart-wrenching, that makes me sound so morbid, does it not? well anyway, I love how you take us through the emotions, giving up almost at the end, a resignation at how some thing will never be the same yet wanting to hold on....great job...good luck
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wow
you put a few twist to this piece dear it is a very deep piece it sorta describes the picture then it goes off in to another topic which is good nice write -
in tears...
This is so sad. Truly a heart breaker. Beautifully written with emotions so deep they go beyond the graphic or this contest. Best of luck. ~Pamela
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