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Rapid Love of Emotions

Like hot smoke flaring from the sky
Like clouds coming together to make a cloud
Like thunder storms roaring

Rapid Love of Emotions

Once in a lifetime
Midnight closing hours
Shower of pouring rain

Rapid Love of Emotions

Casting to a new found love
Pour into soul and heart
Full of treasures hidden to be found

Rapid Love of Emotions

Bursting higher and higher
Can't express with words
Only pen and Paper

Rapid Love of Emotions

Showering upon us midnight rain
Finding the hidden treasures
Like little kids on a hunt

Rapid Love of Emoitions

Carrying fulfillment
Showing that they care
Knowing what is there

Rapid Love of Emotions


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    May 11

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    ooh i love this form of this poem it was just interesting to me. the poem overall was amazing to me it had a lot of emotion to it and i really liked it...GL