Succumbing to my wild midnight dreams,
transcends all desires and emotion.
As I embrace your vivid sweet memories,
once more I feel you tenderly hold me,
sensations and sighs pierce the darkness.
Come share the tranquility of the moonlight,
like the tide rushes in, love flows once more,
I tremble from just the touch of your hands,
thoughts of your caress overwhelm me.
Our desire swells with wondrous intensity.
As your lips tease me with soft tender kisses,
my eyes flutter with excitement as I dream.
Skin to skin, our midnight journey complete,
I awaken breathless as I feel the pleasure,
and the passion you have released in me.
The silence broken as I call out your name,
as I lay there embracing the final moments,
thoughts whisper, such sweet surrender.
I shall love you in my dreams forever more,
keep you tucked away here in my heart.
In a list
A contest entry
- Your happy place. by samantha jean.
800 points, ended July 21, 2007, 27 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Passionate
Very nicely done Sandy.
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Nice Comment
Thank you my friend. It was nice to hear from you yesterday.
Always brings many smiles. Glad tyou enjoyed my poem. You take care. You have a wonderful day. Sandy 
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Great job Sandy!, congratulations on your gold trophy, very well deserved I must say!
hope you're well, take care now!
Alex.
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Lovely Comment
Thank you for this nice comment Alex. Glad you enjoyed it. Hope all is well over there with all the flooding. My prayers are with your country. Thanks for stopping by my friend. Take care, Sandy 
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Now this piece is nothing short of pure excellence, it touched me in all the right places, a thoroughly and sincerely enjoyed read, if the title alone was captivating enough the rest of the piece sure as hell is.
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Nice Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. Always appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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The dream that sighs around hallowed head,
The meadow that lie upon.
Watched making moonbeams.
Became music..
And you became rhytm.
I thought it was a dream.
*****Just GREAT.
..MOM.
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Nice, nice, so nice...feelings tight, love everywhere. Some special personal moments to be remembered. Bravo dear friend for this poetical experience.
~Sonja~
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Lovely Comment!!
Hello, Thank you for the nice comment Sonja. Always nice to hear from you. You take care, Sandy
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i'm speachless this is such a beautiful piece, good luck in the contest!!
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Wonderful Comment!!!
Hello Melba, So nice to hear from you. I always enjoy hearing from you. Thank you for the nice comment. You take care, Sandy
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hi my lovely auntie
Internet is working much better tonight here and I can leave you a comment.
Your poem is very nice and I wish you the best luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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Missed You My Friend!!!
Hello my sweet niece. It was not the same without you here. So nice to see you back. Your comment was wonderful. I hope you have a delightful evening,
Love you, Auntie Sandy
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SUCH SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL DREAMS!!!
I often dream like this, I like to live my fantasies in my sleep.
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So Nice!!!!!
Thank you Kevin. I still have my dreams, no one can take them away. Thanks for always reading my poems. I so enjoy your commernts. They are always written from your heart. Bless you. Sandy
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Bravo
Lovely and sooooo roooomantic! Highly evocative poem here and a perfect compliment to the wonderful illustration... bravo... bravo... bravo...
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Wonderful Comment!!!
Hello Michael. You have made me smile with your lovely comment. A Bravo coming from you makes my day. I am in awe of your amazing talent my friend. Thank you for stopping by and leaving your thoughts. You take care, Sandy
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lovely
Very nicely written..Isn't dreaming wonderful..sometimes it's the only way to make it through reality.
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Lovely Comment
Your comment was very nice and so, appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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Good
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Thank you for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy
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Good
Very well written making memories seem more pleasant than the real experience.
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Great Comment!!!
Your comment was very nice. I appreciate you stopping by and reading my poem. You take care. Sandy
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omg! it sounded so real. it was sad in the end too. good job and best of luck
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Lovely Comment.
Great Comment!! So glad you enjoyed. There is some truth to it. You take care, Sandy
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This is a really nice poem. It makes me miss my girlfriend, who is far away from me alot. Thanks for the chance to read it. Great write, and good luck in the contest.
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Wonderful Comment
Nice of you to stop by and leave a nice comment. It is appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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Wonderful Comment!!!
So glad you stopped by and read my poem. I appreciate your comment. Take care, Sandy
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Great Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. Your comment is so appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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Excellent Poem
I really liked your poem This is truly a wonderful piece of work!And the picture goes good with it too.Keep on writing i hope to read more of your poems!Lisa K Haslett Raytown missouri! -
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Nice Comment!!!
Hello Lisa, It is so nice to hear from you again. I hope all is well with you and yours. Thank you for the nice comment. I appreciate it!! You take care, Sandy
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