A floating star drifts
Ever closer to the heart
A silent fire
Turning hell inverse
An angel with spotted wings
Feathers untarnished
Only highlighted by dreams
Held close to the core
Darkness a combination
Of everything worth owning
Uniquely creativity flows free
Never conforming instead expanding
From beautiful abstract thoughts from within
Ardently concepts form purposeful being
Death's breath could never diminish this thing
In words unheard & yet experienced
Ghosts of the human condition hover
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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I agree, very intriguing write as I have read it three times now. I think I have the meaning...being free and open with ones self...non conforming, after all even the know it alls, know very little...
awesome background!
Michelle
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you are a very interesting writer...
this is thought provoking, even now,
when my eyes are ready to close, i
know i will read this again...
Good work.
Love, Lane
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this indeed was a awesome piece my brotha.
i loved it very warming to this heart of mine.
thanks for sharing it and being you MArkie. Bravo.
Tory -
This poem was so intruiging and inspirational. Every line flowed so beautifully like the stars in the sky. Uniquely written, and my favorite format. Great work!
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Wow! This is such a deeply intriguing write. Well written!
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this would have to be one of my favoret!
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Very well done Mark my friend, seems like somebody liked it so much they spotlighted it. Well written and a great presentation as well...Scott
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Better one of the poems.I like the verse
Darkness a combination of
everything worth owning
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OH MY
VERY GOOD WRITE
BUT MY YOU'RE A BUSY BOY TONIGHT!! LOL -
Indeed wow! I love the last verse acrostic, very suttle yet holds strongly. The background also mixes well with the words and the flow that runs smoothly.
Very beautiful and sensulus -
"Turning hell inverse
An angel with spotted wings"
Love that, meow!
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I respond to old comment. hehe
It's not really an acrostic. Missing an N. lol -
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Subliminal messaging.
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WOW...AMAZING
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I loved how you put this together, it's one of the best I've read tonight. The second stanza was beautiful, I loved the line about the angel.
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beautiful
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Wow, definitely very interesting, unique, and lovely. Great imagery you have used
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wow..this is simply beautiful..and I adore this back ground you have chosen for this piece..
I'm so pleased I chose to read this...thank you....smiles
Excellent write..
Peace
~A~
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Very nice and I loved the end....
From beautiful abstract thoughts from within
Ardently concepts form purposeful being
Death's breath could never diminish this thing
In words unheard & yet experienced
Ghosts of the human condition hover-
Well done, full of mystery.
Thanks,
Creatress
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such a great write. I love to read your work always gives me something to ponder. Luv, siss
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