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cheetah




his luscious muscles
propel
the spots

aerodynamic


paw pads pound
on stiff grasses
arid ground


he takes the time
to flash a smile


at the reporters

as he goes off
in his spot limousine
to his debut


his first hunt




he chases the prey
he lives the dream



Author notes

It's friendliness and humility inspire me. I love it's smile.

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  • VeneVidiVici
    June 27, 2007

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    Haha, I love the "spot limousine" metaphor. Great poem. It was so fun to read and there was some great imagery. Good luck!