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Feverous Friction

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Feverous friction flies-
melting moments

our climatic caresses
singe the senses

hypnotized enchantment
in sultry splendor

skillfully your hands
roam my satin skin

and I fall under your
magical mystical spell
of perpetual passion

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I hope you aren't bored.

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    June 28, 2007

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    Wow, you do have a wonderful imagination hun, beautifully and sensually penned... congratulations on the silver trophy hun

    Karen


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    June 27, 2007

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    this was...

    a cool write i must say. and it didnt bore me lol i like how you ran with your imagination in the picture and reveal to my eye's a very great story


  • tawk gold member
    June 26, 2007

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    Such a sensual and romantic write!! Great take on the picture. Keep up the wonderful writing