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Your Smooth Brown Skin

As I caress,
Your smooth brown skin.

I try to control,
What I know will be a sin.

The way that I feel,
From deep  down in my heart.

I can not be sure,
That I want to be a part.

The LUST that I feel,
As our bodies intertwine.

I can't control,
All these wicked thoughts of mine.

Can this be right?
Cause it feels "OH SO" good!

I'd gladly leave my wife,
If I felt that I could!

Can this be HAPPENING?
Your scent ENTICES ME.

As we make LOVE,
TO A LOVE THAT"LL NEVER BE!
                "BOO"

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  • Barely Breathing gold member
    June 29, 2007

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    This is great and well done on the gold trophy. You definately deserved it. Well done on such a wonderful write.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    June 27, 2007

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    lol you got a adultry side lol! this was a surprise for me to read you so damn up tight and a big meanie to where you really impressed me it is very poetic and thanks for not boring me