Shades of ebony are her skin
Her threads like silken rain
A deadly beauty from within
Brings mortal men much pain
A twisted, beautiful, lovely smile
Carries soldiers to their knees
Her plans unravel all the while
The queen rests at unease
No one knows where she hails from
Nobody knows her true name
They only know she leaves men numb
Bringing villages to shame
Deadly Beauty is her title
Enchanting, slaying; her only game
To herself this art is vital
Wandering Enchantress; her only name
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under ONLY ~ Fantasy Poetry (Word Bank Option) by Amunet Wolfbane.
425 points, ended July 5, 2007, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very beautifully done. I really enjoyed the imager of this piece :D
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weee! really awesome! you have some competition with sasha now...
good luck, maybe you'll beat her (don't tell her I said that!!) really awesome.
Lise
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Woah
I loved this
this was soo cool
I could totally get lost in this story/poem
really nice
peace and love
-faatima
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Woooww....This is an awesome poem. It has a very nice beat witch makes it flow very nicely!
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