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Roots

Roots of soul holding me so
fierce,pulling the weighty pull of life

Grasping to grow;
bound up tight,damp
with indecision

Dominate, create ambitious;
compulsive rejection of thy self

Violent longing starving for depth

 penetration of love
possession of life

Roots Impelled wrapping so tight

 dark moist
crawling toward light so
sheen, distinct

Black like ink surrounds me
I want to see what grows above

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