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Perplexed Illumination

DARKside sophistication
tempts
mystified flames into release

perplexed illumination
explodes
fireworks of desire
into hiding

DARK destruction
sparking
kinetic emotions
of fear and loathing

intrigued
cyanide in veins
of chaos
mutating rays of light
into shadows

an anorexic monkey
playing cymballs in your mind
provoked maggot-filled thoughts
replacing the passion
for DARKness

Author notes

DIAL UP BLOWS SO I CAN'T SET A BACKGROUND!!!

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  • penman gold member
    October 12, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very well written. Such great use of language and developed thought.


  • theDARK1 gold member
    June 30, 2007

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    the background is fine as it does play on a DARK feel. Interesting take as the imagination draws wildly from the wordbank, DARK.