What made you keep me?
I'll never know.
I'm grateful you did,
even when it doesn't show.
I needed you,
as much as you needed me.
He was the door,
and time was the key.
Look at us now,
like night and day.
Sometimes we joke,
like its all ok.
I know your angry,
I can see it in your eye.
Or maybe your sad,
and you wish you could cry.
I'm sorry I caused
all the trouble I did,
but I'll always love you
because I'm still your kid.
Author notes
Written August 16th, 2003
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im kinda confused, not sure exactly who its about, a their relation to each other, but i still i like it though, it has great emotion with feeling.
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very precious. Shows a lot of love from a child.
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Im just wondering is this still about the boy? or is it about being sorry to your mother cus the last line "because I'm still your kid." doesnt sound like something you would call your self to your boyfriend. well anyway let me know and think about puting a note in the author comment ps i read all you other poems they are great and express alot of emotions that are so true to what you where feeling.
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Johnathan
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