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Time

I'm sorry I cheated,
Please forgive me this once.
Never again
will I break your trust.

I can't believe it happened.
I know I was wrong,
but its so very hard,
to even think about moving on.

All these emotions,
came on to strong.
I hate to say it,
but I knew we wouldn't last long.

I can't even put,
into words how I feel...
I'll I can say is I'm sorry...
and time will heal.

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Written August 16th, 2003

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  • September 5, 2003
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    AWESOME!

    this poem is really tight! i have felt this way many times and u but it into poetry format!


  • forever changed
    August 16, 2003
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    This poem has a really good flow from each verse to the next verse,makes you want to keep reading-dats brillant for somebody with short attention span like me lol keep up the good work
    luv sarah x


  • August 16, 2003
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    Love It

    I must say...I really like this one! All of the veres fit together very well in my opinion. 2nd verse is agian my favorite! but they were all good!


    Keep up the good work, Tami!