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Embrace

Consuming,
Your hair consumes me,
My entire being,
Protects me from the world,
Everytime I hold you.

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    June 26, 2007

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    this was

    a very beautiful write love you captured heat and flames in a few lines i like this great poetic style