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Sean

I met you at school,
We drove in your car.
You tried to seduce me,
but I know how you are.

I'm in love with you now,
you got me baffled....
how is it I...
that remains the asshole?

I cheated on you,
yes, we all know.
But Of course its me,
who gets left the big ho.

I'm sorry for everything.
Please don't be mad.
I know I deserve this,
but I miss what I had.

I miss us on the couch,
hugging and kissing.
I miss the feel of your hands,
oh, how I'm wishing.
I'll have you back,
one day I know it.
Til that day comes,
I'll remain here, a poet.

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Written August 16th, 2003

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  • sweetevil
    August 16, 2003
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    Very sweet poem.
    Stuff happens, glad you could write
    about this and hopefully it makes the
    situation more settling.
    Welcome to AP, hope you like it here.
    If ever you have any questions, feel
    free to ask.

    ~Amy ~


  • forever changed
    August 16, 2003
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    really good poem well done luv sarah x


  • Meatllkopf
    August 16, 2003
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    awsome

    great i love your ending
    i also like your way of rymeing
    awsome write
    -SNAKE