your embrace keeps me safe
your body shields me from cruelty and hate
your love comforts and pleasures me
your eyes give me a becon to guide by
your lips give me breath
your soul keeps mine safe
you are my shelter and sanctuary
my holy place my altar
i offer my all before you
Author notes
just the way i see this love.
A contest entry
- Give Me What You Got Picture Inspired by theredcatjazzoflove.
400 points, ended June 27, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great poem dedicated to a great emotion (I think anyway!)
Love is truly something special - well done on a wonderful write!
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Shelter......in the being of the one you love
Certainly a gift from up above
A lovely poem -
fantastic! absolutely beautiful! the title is great. this paints such a colorful picture of this love. well done!
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this was deep with some very great deep expression might i add you put your everything in to this piece My A.P. husband I love it
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WoW!!!! I am in utter shock of beautful this is. This is so exquisit. I am at loss for words....
beka
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