Me and you [in a nutshell]
darling, you were just what I needed
smeared lipstick && broken glass
reality romance trash
your eyes like diamonds
sparkle with dirty thoughts
crimson poison flows like venom
through clotted hearts
[oh sugar]
cross my eyes
&& break my heart
frozen lips still kiss a jagged art
pretty little pills
black && white
your favorite little snack at night
sorry, so sorry doll face
you just don't add up
A contest entry
- Get Carried Away - Rainbowlike Footsteps Lead To.. by LaurenLightning--x.
600 points, ended July 4, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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Very.Pretty.
pretty little pills
black && white
your favorite little snack at night
love the rhyming in this, it really adds to the poem and helps with flow :]
Thank you for entering and good luck!! -
wow I really love this.
just the title pulled me in and made me wanna read it.
your play on words is good.
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