Gather
Memories sweet
Tune swaying dancing sleet
Of rhythmic pulsating heartbeat
Garner
Deep emotions
Ferment life’s notions
Of magical healing dictions
Collect
Fluffy daydreams
Imbue silver moonbeams
Of falling stars and running streams
Roll up
Drumming rhythms
Throb desire quorums
Of melodious hums and thrums
Pick up
Metal Strings
Strum fairy feather wings
Of unceasing enchanting zings
Compile
Author notes
tried more with the swirl cinquain, all 2 syllab wrds mean collecting, and other lines rhyme with associated words .. the 2 n 4 syllab lines give the jist ..
do comment
in case any line's syllable count is wrong do prompt me.
A contest entry
- Cinquains! by azure85.
600 points, ended July 1, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Honorable Mentions Wanted, judged tonight by whispernthedark.
600 points, ended July 7, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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beautiful, i love cinquains. good luck
whisper
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This is wonderful, a swirl cinquain that rhymes, with each swirl so meaningful to the theme! This is really great, and I know it shows your skill as a poet to have composed this gem!
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thanks for your comments
its really encouraging when the piece is given its due.
It was not easy to write as it may seem, it certainly made me sign and look for options and delve deeper in essence .. haha .. but everyone does that .
just hope that it does not get lost
anyways thanks again, and a really nice contest .
cheers,
balli.
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