Darken clouds hear my call
Touch me now with wonder
In your arms hold me in thrall
To the pounding sound of thunder
Touch my brow with tender rain
Wash the perspiration away
From this rock I will now reign
I hold this world in sway
Raindrops filled with luscious tenderness
A touch that thrills sensuous skin
Wanton willful adoring adventuress
Now is the time the storm begins
Gentle rain will wash the earth
Bringing a bright new day
Light and fresh with a new birth
My wonders I now display
I cannot fly through the downpour
Wings plucked from my form
So here I stand and watch the rain
I stand here now transformed
In a list
A contest entry
- Goddess of Rain Contest by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended July 19, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hello my friend
What a joy to read was this, flawless in flow and brimming with imagery. Fully deserved of the gold well done with this amazing write
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This is to remind you that if you wish for me to host a contest with you or write you a poem or nothing at all, please advise which choice. I plan to put you on my page as the Reigning Goddess of Rain by close of midnight tomorrow. Thank you so much for a great entry.
Ted E -
Well done, Sis, this is a delightful piece with some amazing imagery and wonderfully crafted ... a very well deserved gold! xx
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The title truly suggests that you would be a great Reigning Queen after such a fantastic performance with your entry. I know the rest of the competition better hope they are just as good with thier performance! I want to thank you for entering my "Goddess of Rain" contest.
Ted E -
excellent~
Love the imagey you have brought into this poem sis..
Really is truly beautiful..and somewhat thought provoking as well...
Best of luck in the contest...it's a winner in mine already
I have up 2-3 new ones drop by when ya can
Love n hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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