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Unseen Lines -

As a coordinate, I mark the place
Where many a things can be traced;
Such as an island or piece of land
Or a storm's marker hitting the sand

For astronauts, sailors and weathermen alike
Geographically placed, an imaginary spike
I'm the unseen lines that so many have used
The perspective of *lattitude and longitude*

Author notes

Just a wild guess, but the lines of latitude and longitude.

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    July 23, 2007
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    That was a great guess and the poem was just as exquisite. You will earn an Honorable Mention for sure or better, but will not take the Gold as it is an incorrect answer. Definitely nice try!
    I want to thank you for entering my "Another Wacky Contest; A Riddle" contest.

    Ted E

  • WarrioroftheHeart
    June 27, 2007
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    Good luck with this great contest entry, I like the poem


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    June 26, 2007

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    Great poem Storm...I am with you on that one as well.
    Did not think we could put the answer in though so mine is a tad more obscure than this.
    Cheers Hon


  • Heavenly Angel
    June 26, 2007
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    Well done, Storm! Bravo and kudos to you! All the best in this contest!!!

  • Cool.Indifference
    June 26, 2007

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    Well, I guess I'm not being too literal *laughs* Good write with those words; I guessed the same, but couldn't find inspiration in the words.

    Good write.
    TwT
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