He blindfolds me and turns me so my stomach touches the soft satin sheets.
Slowly he undresses me and the touch of his hot body is arousing.
He spreads my legs and lifts my hips so that he can lick me just right. While doing so, he fingers me everywhere and I am quivering with desire.
He turns me around.
He takes the blindfold off and his kisses send me shooting to the sky.
There is not an inch of my body that has not been kissed, touched or sucked. My body is shaking.
I plead with him to take me, make love to me, but he is such a tease.
He starts to lick and touch my most pleasureable spots...
I am going to cum...
All of a sudden I feel him inside me and I start to scream!
Lord help me, I can't wait much more!
Thrust after Thrust.
Deeper and Deeper.
Faster and Faster.
We Cum Together.
We Love Together.
Author notes
Dirty Darling............WillAlwaysLove "Lyan Lore, Wholesome Whore, Bretheren breed, bloody bed!" Option19
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A contest entry
- ~*~All Your Dirty Pretty Comes Here~*~ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
625 points, ended December 30, 2008, 58 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice flow!
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Beautifully sensual and erotic!
Well done and keep up the great
work here. Pleasure to read you again!
Jeremy0826 -
well written
Hello there.
I enjoyed this piece because it is a bit different from most erotica I've read, in that it doesn't over-do the adjectives. This means your nouns have extra sensuality. Thank you very much for sharing this piece as i'm trying to learn this genre and your example me has certainly helped to inspire me in my quest.
Have a sensual day,
BJ.
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This is soo Hot! Wonderful images in my brain.... MMM
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I hope yall didnt make no ababies that night cujming together lol this is a good poem short and sweet a small classic good job and good luck in my contest
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Geeeeez
Well. That was an unexpected ambush on my pregnant hormones. I just sort of stumbled upon this, and am glad I did. This is, I think, the first sensual/erotic poem I haven't gotten bored with. Very well done. Going to go find my fiance now.....
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This is a beautiful poem.
Amazing job, thanks for entering, good luck and keep writing!
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to me this falls under Erotica, So I've got to DQ it... feel free to add another one. Dirty Pretty Is like the entrie from AliceAteACrayon
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WillAlwaysLove
I think that dirty pretty is erotica which is not vulgar. It is sensual, exciting and includes love. Thank you, WillAlwaysLove -
Write more, it's great
I'm not good with writing erotica, but you are! This was steamy hot and gave off a lot of lava. lol It had a very catchy title to it. I liked that a lot. It was well detailed and didn't seem too "clumpy" if that makes any sence. It was really good. Like great. So I think you could continue to write erotica no problem. good luck.
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Wow!
What a HOT experience which takes the reader there as if seeing events unfold
Wow!
What images!
Blindfold....very mysterious
Very
Thank You for sharing this!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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There's some hot stuff there babe, some really hot stuff. I've felt this way before, especially when you multiple orgasm (which is the best!). Nicely sensual and moving, gave me a pleasant feeling all over! Keep up the sensual write and oh, when you're finished with him I'll have a go if you don't mind! Just kidding! (kinda).
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WOW
great porn write... You are sooo good with the erotica.. this has to be one of your best... love the whole poem... made me (well you know) which is what erotica is all about.. great job!!
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So Hot!!
That was incredible-it's either a cold shower or one-handed typing for awhile!!!
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Holy shit I know Gods ears are smoking over this one
Damn this made me wet G. Where did this come from. A new part of you I never knew was there. This was definately wrote with some serious passion. Deep thoughts as well. This was nicely penned,thanks for giving me a ride on the wild side... -
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thank you.
I now have 2 erotic poems. Blindfold and Love at it's Best! I think I should write more? What do you think! LOL
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oh i love this. It starts out with so much lust and it's so hot! and then there is a little twist in the end, where it turns into love.
"We love together"
One thing though - only the first word in a sentence should start with capital. At least that's how I think.
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