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the dam, breaking into laughter



smile lines quiver

splitting the sea --

a string of pearls




Author notes

expression; in the context of "facial expression."

this time: an increasingly happy laugh.

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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    June 26, 2007
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    Oh this is quite beautiful, I love a smile compared to a string of pearls, what a wonderful image. Thank you for this excellent entry. Hugs, Bunny

  • Cupcrazy gold member
    June 26, 2007

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    Your prompt is: "Expression", use it any way you want, use metaphor and imagery and all in ten words. Good Luck, Hugs, Bunny