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fantasy land

Let's go far away together
where we will watch silhouettes fall
            d
              o 
                w
                n
and swallow the paper rainbow stars
                    we bled to fold

Stick silver knives down throats
and play pretend we're princesses
            [everything is okay.]

Leave us alone, you sick filty men
(come with me to fantasy land and play)

We'll say we're sick
and go far far away
where our pleasure is pain

              get the CPR stance ready, baby.
                  i'm fading for you.]


we'll take our cherry colored horses
and gallop away to the unknown forrests-
where children hang from telephone wires
swaying and dancing to the beat of our hooves

Make the choice;;
&take the treat
combined with morphine and
mommy's sleeping pills...

Close your eye's and
dream of the place
we urge to go;'

You say you want a candy filled world?
well, there's candy coated pills
hidden between the blades of grass 
      [be careful, they're gonna be sharp>>]


Let's sail away, sugar cakes
[haven't I reeled you in enough?]
let's go when day breaks,
[I'm going to have the time of my life]

Author notes

let's get away....far from normalcy.
thelovesongwriter

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  • Exodus gold member
    July 13, 2007

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    I really liked the lines;
    "get the CPR stance ready, baby.
    i'm fading for you.]"
    There were one or two words/phrases that made me break out in hives a little bit, but I think I'll be ok. ^_^
    This has a lovely feel to it, Thanks and goodluck


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    June 28, 2007
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    Zomg..

    awesomness doll



    P.s please put ur name in the author comments doll ^-^
    xox


  • Soten-Jaganshi
    June 26, 2007
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    niiiiice. I think my favorite part had to be


    You say you want a candy filled world?
    well, there's candy coated pills
    hidden between the blades of grass
    [be careful, they're gonna be sharp>>]


    I love the imagery it give me, so deliciously morbid.
    Good luck oi?
    ~Soten Shinku-Ha Jagansh

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