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[ I'm blinded by the chemicals, ]

I'm blinded by the chemicals,
Injected in my blood,
Filling up my dieing lungs,
I'm hooked on poison love.

I dream about true freedom,
But its just beyond my grasp,
My soul crys for life,
from behind the druggie mask.

High and getting higher,
I'm never satified,
Longing for escape,
But no place to hide.

My relationships have broken,
My dreams all fade away.
Thoughts croud my spinning head,
but the words just drift away.


I'm so caught up in this life,
Longing to be free.

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  • spirit rising
    June 8
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    finish please its good!!

  • P.Matt
    June 26, 2007
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    vary well written

  • P.Matt
    June 26, 2007
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    vary well written


  • Beating gold member
    June 26, 2007

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    "My dreams all fade away.
    Thoughts croud my spinning head,
    but the words just drift away."
    I love those lines.
    I think we all dream of freedom and being satisfied. It's almost always right in front of us, but hard to get.
    Very well worded!