Pencil-
creative muse
swept over fields of white,
revealing concrete fantasies;
graphite.
Author notes
This is my first cinquain EVER, but I really like trying new things...It's not always perfect the first time around, though, so let me know if it needs fixing! (I actually had to look it up so I knew what it was, and how to do it....)
A contest entry
- Cinquains! by azure85.
600 points, ended July 1, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Une saison en enfer by Aesthete.
1500 points, ended August 24, 2007, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Just say what you feel needs telling...or have one of those random whims to comment on something.
Comments
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Congrats on receiving an HM for this first cinquain you have written. This is a nice form to use and I am sure you will use it again.
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This is an excellent first cinquain! It is a wonderful one, that speaks to every poet who picks up a pencil to write with. Very well done!
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Hey unique. I can appreciate when someone can bring excellence to the table. You have a great creative eye for writing I like that and I like this
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This is a good cinquain, very clever and creative. I like the line:
Swept over fields of white
Beautiful imagery in that line!
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Your first cinquain? wow! I love the pencil making its mark 'swept over fields of white'. Nice imagery and a good poem, I much liked this. Good Luck in the contest and all the best!~
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Transcend All
Groovy ! I love this...If I came across this I'd paint this or write it on one of the walls in my studio. I think it's brilliant! And surly not your first, if so you've got it down! Thanks for sharing your artistic view.
Namaste'
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First cinquain? I never would've been able to tell.
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Well, at least that's a good thing....
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