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Swirling Vortex

Like a cool breeze
I sweep over your
dying hot embers.
Sparks fly, heating
up the whirling
centre of my soul,
burning you ignite,
and spring to life.
Yet we're stuck in limbo,
a mass of nothing,
a mass of everything;
Fueling each other on
we become a swirling vortex
unable to let go.

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Dedicated to Jimmy

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