Why are someday's
like living in a war zone.
Why cant someone wake up
to nice words , hell!
i would
even settle for a good-morning.
Should cussing loudly be allowed
this earlier
my eyes squeezed tight trying to ignore,
but as usual work is the problem
or not so much work but drug,temper
stop screaming.
Cant ignore anymore
Someone needs to check themselves.
I slowly get up
try to make peace
I always make it worse
it doesn't matter what i say.
How can someone be nice one minute
and a total jerk the next.
mornings shouldn't be this way!
Morning should be waking up
to greet the day in yes i survived another night!
Not a war in my own house!
Tired
Frustrated
angry but cant show it
sad
Thanks to the who's supposed to protect me
shelter me
For my grand Day!
Don't you just love sarcasms?
yes i will still do everything right,
clean
cook
laundry
i might get a nap
then i might just call my friend later.
Who knows ..
Mornings are what i make of them!
Time to make it better!
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Comments
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Sounds all too like my mornings when I was living with my parents. Now that I moved in with my best friend, there are no morning arguements. I like how you use present descriptions and focus more on what is happening in the present as the core rather than something that happened in the past. You also include your feelings and reactions to everything. It helps the reader by placing him/her into your shoes. Nicely done.
Thanks for your entry.
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awwwwwwwwww sorry hun but it reminded me of my day yesterday. My mother in law had to have a heart cath done so she is in the hospital, an aunt is in Icu and my favorite wrestler freaked out killing his family and himself. I do like the way you wrote it but I hope tomorrow will be better for you. Love, Tracy
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how true the words ring out
I agree with you mornings should be a time of peaceful solitude, quiet, reflection on the day, reassure and strengthen love, a kiss to start the day and hug, that i care. Never knew why for some it was like a grand decision to be nice in the morning, show some love for the nights rest. I know exactly what you are saying, its like, i must be pissed off, an A.O. to start my day off, and I cannot show any love, but must find something, anything to cuss and let all know who`s the boss. How sad this has to occur. I send you
to brighten your day, and know you are not alone. 
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