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doubtfulness

Doubtfulness smothering my view
unable to see anything fresh

Questionable phrases
pop into mind...

The fog still lingers
everywhere near

A contest entry

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  • crimsondew
    June 26, 2007
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    emotion pictured beautifully..


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    June 26, 2007

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    what a powerful opening couplet!! This situation is so universal to all of us!!

    thanks for your great entry.