You hold her thinking your out of sight.
You little secret cannot be kept;
For I am in shadows watching light.
I see your happiness, it sickens me.
A simple hug breaks my heart,
It cuts me deep in the chest.
For pain is a wonderful art,
That seems to make amends.
You love her so, it's in your eyes,
You have found your joy,
But at a cost, another's dies.
Don't be worried or ashamed,
Of your heart's decision.
The culprit here has been framed,
The one in shadows is at a fault.
Thinking to be loved, when amidst darkness,
Lapsed by herself alone.
All she does is seem to depress,
All those who get in her grasp.
A tear is shed, weeping starts after.
Bloodshot eyes still watch only to see,
The happiness, the purity and laughter,
Which has been denied from me.
A contest entry
- Tell Me The Truth. Did You Ever Love Me? by forbidden-colour.
300 points, ended July 12, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please give me feedback
Comments
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The first verse is pure genius. the title is quite effective. i enjoyed the line
or pain is a wonderful art". the ending was fantastic. another outstanding piece of art created by the one and only sorath. well done.
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"The culprit here has been framed,"
This was great! Nice description and thank you for entering!
Mwahs xxx
Lullaby.x.
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Welcome to All Poetry !
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Wow this is really well written. Very sad and the emotion certainly comes through with your words. Excellenrt imagery in this also. I really enjoyed reading this!
Keep writing, reading and commenting!
Don't forget the new mwmbers contest also. We would love you to enter, if you would like to.
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Gaylene
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Hey it rhymes
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