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the end

why do you leave
though i want you here?
why do you laugh
as i crouch in fear?
this is the end
i know and i fear.

yes i fear.

This is the end of paradise
just thought that you should know
this is the end of everything
and you'll be the first to go.

this is the smile
that you have erased
replaced by tears
streaming down my face
This is the end
i no longer fear

i no longer fear.

This is the end of everything
the pain you caused will now die
this is the end of your faith
you now find that it was lies


This is the end!!!
soon you will see!!!
(you will see)
This is the end!!
of you and of me!!!
(you and me)

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  • crystallynnbradford
    September 18, 2007

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    this is very very good...i am loviing it...the rhyme and the flow...this was just an absolutley amazing piece and I loved reading it

  • TheUnholyProtector
    June 27, 2007
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    good job

    nice rhyme. is this about you and me?