Tears come rolling out
As I fall into the black abyss
I had too many morals to even see
Only a few short months ago
(Cant take this anymore
Dont know what I'm gonna do
Sometimes I just feel disconnected
From who I used to be)
I'm setting my sights
On something unattainable
And something no-no good
For anything I should want
(Cant take this anymore
Dont know what I'm gonna do
Sometimes I just feel disconnected
From who I used to be)
Accusations thrown at me
Like acorns to the ground
And I'm too gone to notice
That they're all t-r-u-e
(Cant take this anymore
Dont know what I'm gonna do
Sometimes I just feel disconnected
From who I used to be)
In desperate need
Of some self revelation
Before I fall to far
To even look back
Author notes
I gotta leave my town. Im causing some drama ive been to drunk to notice. I need help, and i gotta find it....leave me a comment, i want your opinions on my poem, it would mean a lot!
So fucked over
Comments
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Crappin shit, can I relate to this...
There's issues that I never realized about myself until they were being thrown back at me, and by then, I was so far gone from everything that I used to be that I really didn't give a flying fuck.
But there is good news... It makes for wonderful writing. =]]
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(Cant take this anymore
Dont know what I'm gonna do
Sometimes I just feel disconnected
From who I used to be)
I can totally relate to this right now.
I'm obviously not in the exact position you are, but I do know what it's like to feel like you're not who you were. I'm not really the greatest at giving advice, but if you just need someone to listen, I'm pretty good at that.
this is a great poem! I really love your writing. keep it up!
[Jessica]
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