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Haiku Sequence 3



painting
my garden in silver
the moon

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lotus flowers
inside the muddy duck pond
brilliant stars shimmer

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chirping birds
perched in the lime tree
an empty cage

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a bird crashes
against the window
the cat awakens

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beaming
through your eyes
god



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  • Yvette Champ
    July 3, 2007
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    Simply beautiful but not simple.


  • pvenugopal silver member
    June 26, 2007
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    Great.


  • blondone silver member
    June 26, 2007

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    Awe now this is beautiful writing your talent shines I just love the soft tones and the powerful imagery just lovely maa...you have a great day today