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Haiku Sequence 2


captured
in white spirit
the sun

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swimming
in your eyes
a duck

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resting
inside my red bag
a chicken’s head

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a rubber-mouse
running around the house
in the cat’s jaws

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a housewife
watching “greg the millionaire on tv
the bailiff rings


Author notes

* concerning the chicken-head, I am vegetarian -
yet when I was a child, I collected the heads and claws of chicken from the butcher to console them about their death and to give them a funeral ...

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  • MargaretG silver member
    June 26, 2007

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    These are tasty hors d'oeuvres, Marion! I commented on two already, but they are all bright images. I like "swimming", that has a nice aha!