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Food Fit For A Queen - Haiku Chain

flitting wings buzz by
upon a warm summer's breeze
bumble bees dancing

deep petals of pink
nectar seeps their enticement
food fit for a queen

gathered with their love
delectable nourishment
her highness enjoys

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  • Wonderwhenitllrain
    June 28, 2007

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    this is prettyful!
    I can really see the queen bee here, a metaphor of some sort?
    Great job and thanks for entering!
    Amber