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Keeping you away

Stay away, don’t come near,
You put me to shame and fear.
I don’t want anything to do with you,
It is the end and we both knew.
Please don’t come around me,
I am in pain please believe…
Having you around,
It only brings me down.
Picturing you with her,
Hurts me for sure.
Just turn around and pretend,
You never knew me even as a friend

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  • romil z
    July 3, 2007
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    awesome

    i really liked it, you have expressed it so nicely...yeah its deep and so well written. i can relate and feel every word its really good!...its a great poem i like it! sry i cant applaud a lot cos i think i have only 5 free left i dont knw hw this works im new here!


  • Belial Bloodrayne
    June 26, 2007
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    poor baby, i will kill them


  • Dirty and Broken
    June 26, 2007
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    ...i don't know wht to think 'bout this one

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