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you can't google god

drab
  pallid buildings
stare me down

    i lower my gaze
who am I
  to    challenge  these  giants?…

how do I stack up
  against two-story buildings
  and NINE MILLION PEOPLE states

                                          -what’s the verdict?



oldest tale in the book;
    girl likes boy
    boy likes girl
                  and takes off……

in a tale this old you’d think pain would be
  cliché?

yet it’s fresh
          like a peach      kissing
your fingertips


ican’tsee
ican’tsee
    buildings basking in the sun
    windows open in a smile
ican’tsee
   
    but Horus sees all

Alaska to New Jersey

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  • ----michael----
    September 13, 2007

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    I googled God and got taken to the dyslexic dog lovers website.

    This is wonderful, unlike my joke (see above).


  • D u a n a gold member
    June 26, 2007
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    wow, this is over my head. I just loved the title!