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Out of Order





Age crept
              up fast;

internal clock chimed
                  {too late}


menapause arrived--
                            
                     plumbing out of order.


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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    April 1, 2008

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    Where you spying on me? LOL This sounds like something I said to my sister several days ago LOL This is one well written piece. Excellent.


  • Matt Holck
    June 26, 2007
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    no frozen reserves?


  • lavender shadows
    June 25, 2007
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    LOL! This is hilarious.


  • blackday
    June 25, 2007

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    LMFAO.


  • Vernal
    June 25, 2007
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    Oooooh. I absolutely love this take on it! Thank you very much.


  • Vernal
    June 25, 2007
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    Your prompt is: Rusted water pipes.

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