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Pure Love

Pure Love,
Is there any left?
Swore under God they did,
Yet here they stand,
In a room leaving each other,
Over a fight instead of working,
It out they take
The easy way out.

Pure Love,
Stays together unto death,
Through thick and thin,
In sickness and health.
Isn't that what love's
All about?

Pure Love,
Is never ashamed,
Never says that
Its over now
No point anymore
Lets just throw it away now today
After the oath before God
The Almighty.

Pure Love,
Thats what I want,
None of that cheap easy stuff,
Stay together no matter what,
When I say that oath before God,
Nothing that will happen,
Will keep me from trying,
Others say "Thats an impossible try."
But I say "You go your way and I'll go mine,
Through Jesus Christ I'll be right."

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  • Three Doves
    August 22, 2007

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    Pure love is the only kind there is. The flesh tends to get things confused. I really like your poem. In Christ is love.


  • Artemis Gem
    July 22, 2007

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    THANK YOU!
    *hugs*
    IM SO GLAD THERE ARE OTHER PEOPLE WHO STILL THINK ABOUT PURE LOVE, rather than teh trashy erotic crap that floods this site.

    Pure Love,
    Thats what I want,
    None of that cheap easy stuff,
    Stay together no matter what,
    When I say that oath before God,
    Nothing that will happen,
    Will keep me from trying,
    Others say "Thats an impossible try."
    But I say "You go your way and I'll go mine,
    Through Jesus Christ I'll be right."


    amen! THis is amazing, and just-wow! Keep it up!

    pegleg


  • CoveredInTheBlood
    July 16, 2007
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    This was great... I loved it.


  • Pianokidd
    July 4, 2007
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    My first impression was:There is pure love!I liked the flow.