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Attic Treasure

Hope chest--

accumulated dreams,
antiqued by time
and wanton unfulfillment


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  • penman gold member
    July 2, 2007
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    Wonderful

    A great poem on the prompt. Congrats on your silver.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 25, 2007
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    This says so much... x


  • Bedroom Eyes
    June 25, 2007

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    Hope chests are meant to hold exactly that...hope for something in the future. So long as there is breath to be drawn, and the sun rises & set, there is hope for the future.

    Well done with this piece!

    Best of luck!


  • lepos in iocando
    June 25, 2007

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    This is just such a good write. I can't help but agree, I think you are going to place. Excellen write, Truly Truly Excellent


  • The Reapers Angel
    June 25, 2007

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    Wow.. very great!
    Love it so much! You're bound to place.
    Good job and luck!
    Free smiles:

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